Transcendence
The first chapter was captivating... it was downhill after that. Plot "transcended" into too many directions... large excerpts of the story irrelevant to the entire plot.
Badly needs to be edited for grammar, punctuations, and overall flow.
Badly needs to be edited for grammar, punctuations, and overall flow.
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